I’m trying to remember what happened chronologically.
Chapter 4
I’m a bit confused how the West block is set up. So apparently, the correctional facility is set up there, but apart from that, it’s the Wild West over there? Wouldn’t it make more sense to have a facility like that in a more controlled area to oversee what’s happening there?
The water blister thing did suffer from the ‘it’s mentioned, so it’s obvious’ foreshadowing, though after diving through trash soup I wouldn’t be surprised if you caught nasty things there.
Oh my god Nezumi is so edge-lordy, I guess he’s intentionally being a tease, but it takes a sweet soul like Shion to endure it.
Those mice are so fricking cute! I love them so much. Named the chestnut(?) one already Chichi in my head. So I guess they’re real mice! And they like to be read to, my heart is exploding. Having a cute animal assistants is a bonus in every story.
Poor Shion can’t catch a break. Within 48 hours he’s had to witness a dead body, have his sperm requested, witness another grueling death, be wrongfully detained by your local friendly fascist government, jump out a driving and exploding car, dive through literal shit water, have a parasite be born out of your neck alien-style, and be left with permanent marks on your body.
I mean, I kinda DO agree with Mr Mouseboy, they could look worse, they look kinda cool, ngl. From just reading it, I expected far worse, for a moment I thought he’d turned into a literal snake or have a snake head coming out of his back Voldemort-style. Seeing the illustration on the covers and in the manga, it was kinda anti-climactic, lmao. My reaction was kinda like when they revealed the birthmark in Ready Player One .
Edit: Why is the formatting f’ ed up?
Edit2: Apparently the hlines caused it