綺麗に整った眉が下がり、困ったように八の字を描いている。
Congrats!
I’m doing a lot better than I thought I would for one of my first books, so I get that “super nice” feeling.
I hope one day I can say this about audio books too 
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I’m not sure if you’re quoting this to me to add onto the list of her features, or if you think that’s the line I was referencing, but if the latter - not quite. That’s her eyebrows 
I meant this line:
そう言うと、 翡翠は長い睫毛を伏せて、急に寂しげな表情を見せた。
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Was trying to add to the list 
I think I’d never seen eyebrows being described like this in a book before
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Ah, gotcha! I wasn’t sure by just the smilie
Honestly the descriptions here make me think of romance novels with all the pains being taken to impress upon us her beauty.
spoiler but not a spoiler really:
When I was searching for 長い睫毛 in my ebook it came up several times 
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That’s on me honestly. I’m still learning English, so I either end up not explaining at all or explaining too much (to make sure I’ve completely expressed myself)
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Like others have said, I really like the way the story is going. It’s fun to logic our way through the rules of paranormal phenomena.
There was something about it in the prologue too.
Yes, it’s mildly annoying, except if the two characters end up together. They seem to have a large age difference though, so I’d rather avoid that
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