And I have now finished https://learnnatively.com/book/bf7226aed9/ in a day and a half. So I’m not going to say I did not enjoy it (in fact, it was pretty fun) but…
… I do not agree with that statement. If anything, the writing felt worse than the previous volume, since we have a bunch of characters with typical action manga/LN weird speech patterns and unbelievable behavior. Y’all should all be either much stronger or dead with that kind of attitude.
In terms of annoying speech patterns, the foreigner who partially speaks English (but incorrect English, because the author couldn’t get anyone to proofread? Or maybe the editor just thought it didn’t matter) and follow the trope of making strange mistakes when speaking. For instance, the character mixes up insults, saying ボケカボチャ instead of ボケナス or ドテカボチャ. Like, it seems like a weird thing to mix up, I don’t know.
On that note, I was quite happy that the character did not accept to date “ミモリン” (or anyone who’s willing to date him just because there’s an opportunity). Slightly unrelated, but I do like the way he is shaping up to be.
I wonder if I should just tempt my luck and go to a BOOK OFF to find the next volume(s) 
Reading on paper has been feeling much more comfortable (and much cheaper) than on my phone… But shelf space is still a premium, so I don’t know.
