Home Thread 魔女が恋する5秒前 - Finished

Hello Hello! Welcome to the Yuri clubs reading of this manga!

Summary - Japanese

孤高の大魔女メグと魔女狩りのリリスはいつも森でいがみ合っては喧嘩している宿敵関係! 好きだから悪戯して、挑発して……を繰り返してしまう、そんな不器用な二人を、周囲は呆れながらも微笑ましく見守っていた──しかし、あるトラブルで本音が漏れてしまった! 切羽詰まった状況で、ブチギレながらも二人は告白寸前の状況に!?

Summary - English

[DeepL Translation - needs review] Meg, a solitary great witch, and Lilith, a witch hunter, are sworn enemies who are always quarreling in the forest! They play pranks on each other because they like each other, provoke each other and repeat… People around them are amazed at their clumsy relationship and smile at them… but one problem causes their true feelings to leak out! In the face of an impasse, the two are on the verge of confessing their feelings, even though they are pissed off!

No Furigana

Content warnings

None that I’m aware of

Discussion ground rules

  • Any spoilers, for the current chapters must be behind spoilers or detail curtains. When we get further in you don’t need to hide details that were revealed in previous chapters.
  • Always mention where you are in the book when discussing, ideally by chapter so people reading different versions have a clear point of reference.
  • Feel free to read ahead if it’s exciting! But please refrain from spoiling ahead of the appropriate week :slight_smile:
  • If you have a question about grammar, vocab, cultural things, etc - ask! That can be part of the discussion too and I’m sure some folks would be happy to help.
  • Even if you don’t read the chapter(s) in time, you are still encouraged to post in the thread for that reading once you have finished it. I advise not reading ahead in the threads as you may see spoilers.

Timetable

Since it’s a similar level as the last cycle, and at least it looked like things were going okay pace-wise last time, I’m making it it the same pace (if there’s any problems with this please let me know here or by message)

Start Date Pages
1/11/2024 5-42
8/11/2024 43-82
15/11/2024 83-128
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Got started on it already - it’s pretty fun and cute so far :slight_smile:

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and we’re off everybody!!!
have fun!!! and don’t forget that nominations over at the club are open :kissing_heart:

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Oh, no. It’s not all a single story? That sucks. :frowning: At this point anthologies and very short stories just feel like taunting to me.

Week 1 page 5 to 42

what does キスなんかで解けるかっての mean? I don’t understand the かっての part. I assume it translates to something like “as if something like a kiss would dispell it”

Also, not that it matters at all, but what gender is the apothecary? Looked like a guy to me. But when I saw the dark finger nails I wasn’t so sure. And they have ear rings. But on the other hand they have a thick neck and no visible breasts.

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It’s suppose to be episodic stories of the same couple no?

The second chapter seemed entirely unrelated to me. But I didn’t read it yet.

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finished the first chapter :slight_smile:

week 1

after reading the blurb, I was a bit worried about the enemies-to-lovers cliché, but so far it was really cute!

I had some trouble with that phrase as well, my first thought was the same as you translated it.
I think after breaking it down as
キスなんかで 解けるか + って + の
it sounds more like “Do you think/did you think something like a kiss would dispell it?”, I guess not too different in meaning.

I was about to very confidently reply that he looked like a guy, but had a second look and only now noticed that they also have detailed eyelashes, and other than their clothes, the style they’re drawn in seems like what you’d expect if she was a short-haired woman ¯\_(シ)_/¯
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so I checked and the second chapter IS unrelated.
the third is related though
after that it’s extras (this manga is VERY short even for a manga)

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I read this in English. You are correct: the first and third chapter are the same characters but the second chapter is completely different (and mehh in a weird way🤨). MangaUpdates has a section for related series on every title and lists the title for the manga/first chapter and the chapter as prequel and sequel of each other. The page for the second chapter leaving this part blank. No correlation except maybe the fantasy parts I would suppose.

Assumed it was a backstory of some kind with one of the characters introduced in the first chapter but the characters list clarifies.

All of this to realize someone already said this in short :no_mouth:

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第1話の感想

Just finished the first chapter. It was fine, but not particularly moving. Rather than having her bantering with the apothecary, I would have preferred her interacting more with the other lead

Let’s say non-binary, and call it day

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Starting to indicate Week 2 a bit early due to some messes on my side!
Don’t forget to have fun everybody :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:
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第2話 - Well that was cute, and slightly more intense than I expected. It made me think of ガヴリールドロップアウト 1 | L21 (not yuri afaik, cgdct 残酷な天使と良心的な悪魔キャラたち comedy)

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week 2

Enjoyed this chapter too! really liked the dynamics between エル、ベル and カンナ.

it also seemed to me that the difficulty was a bit higher than the first chapter, there were more words that I had to look up.

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agreed on the difficulty part, was the same with me :100:

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Week 3

I quite liked this week and first week. I didn’t care that much about the intermission bit. I wish it were more substantial.

I thought 腹を括りwas interesting. My interpretation is that it more literally refers to the tensening of the stomach muscles for preparation of impact. I didn’t know of a similar English saying that refers to this.

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IM SO SORRY EVERYONE

I was completely convinced that week 3 starts on the 18th! I’m so so so sorry
We’re on week 3!!

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Week 3 was cute and fine. The illusion fire thing was kinda funny, and it was cool that the witch used the truth serum on herself. I wanna know what happens to the town after tho. Like does Meg keep raiding/messing with it? If so, how does Lilith maintain her job? What do the town folks do about it? If not, do they mend their relationship with Meg? Does Meg just avoid the town (besides the apothecary) entirely?

Since ppl asked about the apothecary’s gender earlier, they were in fact male, 魔男 specifically

Anyway, wasn’t a particularly interesting read, but wasn’t a bad one either

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week 3

I liked this one as well.
maybe it wasn’t too unexpected, but still thought it was funny how ハチ turned out to be a neutral party, selling potions to both witch and hunter.

and same as 暁のルナ, I’d wish to see how their relationship as supposed enemies would develop later, since it’s still リリス’s job.

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Just finished this. It was okay, but nothing great. Yuri Hime series often don’t click for me, so I’m not surprised.

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An aside, but as an avid YH reader I wouldn’t consider the 3 oneshots here representative of other YH stories (including their other oneshots, at least in 2024), in terms of content or quality.

(Not trying to sell you on YH, but did wanna mention, for others who might not have tried many of their works yet)

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